An ode to solitude!
(Diary entry:06)
Revisited!
Good evening, my friend!
What plans do you have tonight?
Do we spend another in my room-
Or should we take a walk by the river side?
I am no more a coward;
I’ll tell you all the truth
I haven’t only cheated
I have mistreated you too!
Always saw a fiend in you
Chased people for company-through and through
Dismissed the relation I share with you
You were a friend-never accepted it though!
When the evenings went gray
And the nights were dark…
When there weren’t banter
No company that I sought…
You always came back to me
To be at my side!
To keep me gay
Letting me be my way!
Hand in hand
Now we lay…
Listening to the chariot of time
Sleeping it away
While they conspire about our way
Let’s live it our way
For the bliss I found in thee
Oh my friend! I love you if you may!
i like d image u have given wid d post…it in itself speaks a lot…
n d creation n chain of words adds to the whole beauty…
**To be at my side!
To keep me gay
Letting me be my way!
speaks a lot abt a loner…really well written
@ Mayz…
well, i dunno! I just copied it from my dairy-was written two years ago!
daunting lines… like the way u build up the whole relation. good one, yaar
@ xh….
eh, thank gawd u din’t say HAUNTING!
Image is really good…whoever has clicked it, captured it well…the colors r really warm
Diary entry rite? just like tht or as a reaction to sumthin?
@ Divkiran
i agree!
Diary entry-yeah-dates back to 2006!
Reasons for revisiting you may ask-well, guess I’d again tried to fool solitude!
your words are surreal and they spell magic around…..tis is very special
@ ashu…
lawl! i thot least this one was very simple!
I call it rendition of sorts..wonderful! U are one talented gal re.
@ Mez….
rendition…hmmm…
thnx re…:)
Solitude is the best company I’ve ever had Sinner!
Very well put.
This is why I come to ur blog. Ur posts always speak the TRUTH…and I can so relate to em.
And I forgot to say, ur pic in that last post is v BEAUTIFUL!
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
beautiful poem.
so very well put…solitude, our unflinching companion across time…its funny how much u can say it without getting a reply bak
@ Keshi…
I agree!
thnku grl!
@what’s in a name
thnx!
@ Numb…
hahhhaa..the best part I tell u
hey!
extracts from ‘the old diary’ time!! nice…the best part of looking back is to see how far you’ve come!
…but ‘YOU’ yourself always remain your best confidant and companion! solitude is a good antidote to anything. agreed on that. still being a loner is not on the cards here i presume!
**I am no more a coward;
I’ll tell you all the truth
I haven’t only cheated
I have mistreated you too!**
That would be the most difficult of all confessions for anyone i guess.
**Now we lay…
Listening to the chariot of time
Sleeping it away
While they conspire about our way
Let’s live it our way**
I loved the connect here..
you confess and then you suddenly conjure up the courage to pay no heed to what other’s think.. it’s always in the same order.. until and unless one doesnt have the balls to stand up and admit his wrongs bluntly, he wouldnt be able to show the indifference to the outsiders opinions.
@ Nachi…
***the best part of looking back is to see how far you’ve come!
yeah! but when it is revisited sometimes its redemption!
well, presumptions-what can i say!
@ Lash..
I agree!!!
U have been tagged !!
@ listener
awkayy…
aweSome … last line i liked best…
@ prakhar…
u had it in u 2 yrs back… u have it in u now too
good one. stored for posterity .. it is magnificent 
i hope u r not talking abt solitude ?!
well whom r u really referring.. if i may ask
@ veens…
I am talking about solitude alone…
wonderful writing, Neha.
The best thing is to be alone…
@ manasa…
is it?
umm yaah, u can think, u can be what u want to be, u can talk to urself w/o getting judged…
i guess its best to be you anyhow-alone or not!!!
the fact that it always hangs around makes us take it for granted…
@ vands…
yaah!
i thought i’d confess
I hate the way my father talks about church nonstop, it’s gets annoying. i know he is a preacher but dude talk about something else for awhile…. well anyways um wat i’m confessing is i used to do bad things get in fights….i let the monster inside my self rule over me and it tore out my friends hearts to see me the way i was doing wat i was doing…… i stopped after they yelled and yelled i son’t know y it didn’t stop me at firt but then it hit me as i sat in my room alone in the darkness surrounded by empty space that wat i was doing was crazy the fighting the drugs getting suspended and stuff……. i apoligized so many times for wat i did and wat i did hauts me to this very day it’s left so many scars on my heart and how my friends dealed with it i don’t know but i’m glad they did or i would probly be in more trouble right now……… i said more about my mistake and saying sorry on my page it’s called mistake if u wanna read it…….. srry but i had to confess glad u made this blog
I like this! Its nice the way you treat solitude as a friend. Somewhat self-contradictory ideas are made to concur.
This is something I wrote on very similar lines quite a long while ago -
http://sonbolshoy.blogspot.com/2008/06/melancholy-my-love.html