Rushes
Finally, it fails me,
The lost echo of the last sound
A reverberation at the distance
A strung in the guitar, lost and found
Then it could happen, life waiting for me. And I could act silly and take a chance again. But my brevity lies in waiting, even if it gets longer and the silence is at times too much of a distraction.
I want a word, a sound, a sigh, a whisper…
P.S-Whenever Wildflower writes, I just know that I wanted to put words to the same things. But where I fail miserably, she does it with excellence.
your depth is sometimes beyond me
neha aka gypsy ji,believe me you do not fail at all..in fact you are much better in putting up words than your wildflower.. u say so many things in between the lines….
so you want a word, a sound, a sigh, a whisper…hmm ha ha….
a word, a sound, a sigh, a whisper…becomes so much more precious when u really want it!
yu know gypsy..sometimes i wonder..how good wud it have been had we never had felt this dire need to write..this urgency to vent,…would that have been better that way? may be/may be not..
And I dont think I deserve this big an honor..but thanx..
But Silence after all may not be just a distraction but a hum of time itself, the trail of the moments we never thought could last so long
I did click on the link you provided. No doubt what I read is beautiful.. however I think you underestimate yourself. I have been reading you for some time now and trust me you keep getting better and better. your words, sounds, sighs, whisper… and even silence is audible.. heres wishing .. more power to your pen .. (or the keyboard)..
You, too, write with excellence
Excellent,,,,
Beyond Words.,,,,
should it be strum?
life happens while ur planning for it..never wait for it to happen…
like ur blog . im 22 n gemini too. lol
Yes, your writing is wonderful. I am so glad I cam across your blog … lots to read here, I will be back often .)
beautiful.. if only living with memories could be less painful, appreciating their tender touch would be such a glorious experience
Busy??…no post long time
Nice to see your new world.your writings are very profound.
cheers
tc
profound words
‘the silence is at times too much of a distraction’
Silence is a distraction so you want a word, a sigh, a sound, a whisper?
@ everyone
thanks for ur comments etc !