Stuck in a moment
Me and you are stuck in a moment.
It’s like a movie, where there is a co-centric movement to a specific scene. You might go to and fro, I might move around in circles, but we have to come back to the moment-again and again.
There is lot more to this moment, which our eyes can see or our minds can make out of it; a lot more that our hearts know and feel. We might not even feel the same about this, ironically, but it is inseparable now. We rather depend on it-this moment-more or so. It is one thing that connects me and you. One thing, the only, that is and shall always be common between us. Like a pact, its mutual and its silence is more than comforting. You watch it-replay this moment, muted, while I give in to the blaring sounds, deafening every other thought.
It’s like a pause, if not a full stop. It gives us our space, like a breather, it lets us accommodate better; it leads to a decision- a better one at that. We do and we shall remember each other, for this moment.
We would always remain, forever, in our lives stuck in a moment.
wow…forever a few of us remain…stuck in a moment.
very nice..me likes.
take care
That’s one beautiful moment!!
Honestly, it seemed something written for ‘us’.
Coz, I related myself in every moment.
If you know, what I mean.
Superb post neha
Loved the way you have weaved the concept…
keep it up and keep writing
@ sach
yes. we do. which is why it becomes so hard to move apart.
@ Rainboy
@ Raaji
@ Prakhar
sure is.
@ Rohit
hemmm!
@ Ruchi
thank you!
sooooo trueeeeeeeeeee!!!!
love it!
simple n profound at the same time
n 4 some reason i kinda liked this line a lot: “It’s like a pause, if not a full stop.”
n i had left a comment in your prev post that still awaits moderation…aisa kya keh diya maine?
wow! I feel like making someone read this post. It conveys something which I would have liked to say but could have never done it so poignantly. I read it more than once..
Nice, neat work! Happy I came across your post first to have read this!